7 thoughts on “Yvonne’s RJN Chapter 5, “The Anger was Brewing in Me””

  1. Loved your new chapter, Yvonne, because it helped me to better understand my DIL whose dad died the day she and my son got back from their honeymoon. The wedding was rushed, knowing he was dying, so I’d heard her share (over the years) so much of what you shared too.
    I did a bit of Proofreading and as He revealed to us, I left it as a comment for you to use and then probably delete the comment.
    Ooopsy haha I just noticed you recorded an audio that will be different, so speak to your Husband. Maybe you just want to paste in the original or I suppose you’ll need to rerecord it.
    UPDATE: My Husband also pointed out a better way to advertise (using the title of the chapter).

    1. Thank you Erin, no worries. I was planning on recording again once my whole novel is finished because there may be some reworking later. just making it easier for the ladies coming in now. Thank you for taking the time to update it for me. Hahaha, I have some chapters mapped out, but I have no idea how this novel is going to end. It will be a surprise for all of us, me included :):)

  2. My dear friend Yvonne, I cried reading chapter 4, because I know how difficult it must have been to talk about your mother’s passing away.

    And in Chapter 5 when Ian said: “Well, it could have been worse; they could have been elephants flying around.” I see your laughing in front of me.

    You are a brilliant writer and you kept me so captivated with your chapters. It was so interesting to read my dear friend.

    1. You are so sweet my dear friend. These were parts of my journey that you were not part of, so I am glad to have you share in them.

  3. Thank you Yvonne for sharing this chapter, in my case I dealt with almost the same situation yearly, but not from my side; my fh’s father suddenly passed away two months before our wedding. We were prepared to move the date for his mom’s sake (and his sake) but they all agreed the wedding should continue. My fh did not deal with his father’s death very well and it also affected him yearly on the anniversary. Sharing your heart gave me insight and understanding to what happened yearly.

    In my case I am very bad with birthdays and anniversaries and normally remember two or three days later that it was somebody’s birthday, that is why my aunt always reminds me:):):) and the dates my parent’s passed away never really affected me, which is maybe a blessing. I also had more time to deal with my parent’s passing away before I got married.

    1. Wow, Adina, when I shared this chapter, I never thought that as with Erin it will give anyone insight to have better understanding of what someone else might be going through. This is more than I ever imagined.

      1. Thank you for sharing this Yvonne, I do understand how something so heart breaking can affect somebody for so long and in such a profound way, it also took me a while to deal with my mother’s death, because it was sudden. But my dad had cancer and that was completely different, you have time to prepare and say goodbye, although it is still heart breaking. But in my dad’s case it was also a “relief”, to see them suffer so much, not being able to eat, or get up anymore, is difficult to see and that also breaks your heart.

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